Reviews for My Forever |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is dark, well-written, and an effed up version of Peter Pan. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ..AWESOME-SAUCE! please update soon, this fanfic is so entertaining! |
![]() ![]() I'm waiting for jinx and abbi to get it on! lol So glad Jinx came and saved her! |
![]() ![]() Another amazing story that an author has given up on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was wondering when you're going to update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes on to the next chappie! WOT WOT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update... Plz of Plz. I absolutely adore this fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY finally an update YES... *does hapy dance* |
![]() ![]() ![]() No idea for a second book, but I'm glad that he did show up. Although the fact that he expects her to come up with a plan sucks, hopefully she'll think of something. Hmm...I actually don't really have a lot to say, but I did like this chapter. And I think if it went slower it wouldn't have the same impact. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another awesome Chap by awesome Author,lol. Sorry no ideas, but a question, will she fall in love with Jinx, that would be awesome! Will she sleep with him, that's an idea,yep, there's one of my ideas for . Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, wow, this story is amazing, never ever read anything like this before! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope that you can justify and explain why you put that rape scene in there. I love your plot, your description and overall wording (maybe jealous was used too much but still) some paragraphs might be a bit long but otherwise, this is a great story! write more. |
![]() ![]() Please update as soon as possible. This story is confusing as hell as some points, but I love it anyways! |
![]() ![]() ![]() For some reason I kept thinking Jinx was going to come in the nick of time and save her and then he didn't. Man, that chapter became intense near the end. She does act really young though, I thought she was about sixteen but she seems younger. That's a horrible thing to happen. And you got it across without being TOO graphic. Like I feel so bad for her but it's not as if you went into huge blow by blow detail which is fitting for her voice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm... I'd always wondered what would've happened if Peter had kept Wendy, or if he had stayed behind. This is nothing like what I thought but it's really really interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter, do we get to meet pirates (I assume we do) the Indians or Mermaids? And that's cool about the whole giggling twin thing. Was that just a random thought? And is there a purpose for the creation of the twins? |