|Reviews for Unicorn|
| Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
Good description of a unicorn.
| Indigo Smith chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
Very good use of metaphors. I liked it.
| SilentRiver chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
This subject could easily become cliche, but you keep it going nicely. The imagery was pretty, and it had the tone of a lullaby (almost). Keep Writing!
| Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
I guess that is a unicorn to you.
| Areneth chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
I think I have a weakness for unicorns. I liked this poem! A few of the lines didn't flow well, I thought the last stanza felt stifled almost in the end. But I also liked the imagery, it was very nice.
| skylines chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
very nice! excellent use of metaphors, they set the scene quite well.
| Evelyn Skye chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
such a lovely poem. if it hadn't been for the title, i wouldn't have known it was about a unicorn. the verses are so subtle, as are the descriptions and hints you drop.
| ElizaJune chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
Very descriptive writing. I like it. Beautiful.
| Dream of Hope 594 chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
Hey The poem is awsome. I like that it doesn't have a set way to go. it doesn't always rhyme which doesn't bother me one bit. I think poetry should be judged on how it feels rather than actual words. I hope that makes sense. I did find one thing though. The poem kind of hangs at the end like its is not finished.o ther then that great poem.
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| Conrath chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
sorry to spoil a good poem... but i think this goes into the poem section rather than the original fiction.
Just wanted you to know
| singinstrawberri chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
i like it a lot, the poem is lovely as the unicorn i'm sure.. one thing i noticed is that it doesn't really seem to end. but anyway, this is mighty enjoyable.
| CentauriSk chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful...
| Wee-lil-pirate chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
i liked it! very sweet.
| WordSarien chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
That was a beautiful poem! I love unicorns, and that describes how i think of them perfectly! you should wrte more of these!
| Jessica Southgate chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
-Unexpected as the summer storm
And rages like it too.-
Gorgeous opening sentance. I love it. It really sets the tone.
-Drowning one in it's warmth-
This should be "Drowning one in its warmth". "Its" isn't a contraction in this case.
Overall, it has great imagery, and I like it. However, the flow seems a bit broken and jumpy through part of it.
Keep up the good work!