Reviews for Borrowed Heaven
bulletproof.cupid chapter 2 . 7/14/2006
grr, hun- alysha- sweetie, i are angry. very angry if you must know. you haven't updated since forvever and the ending just makes me want to scream and rip my pillow into shreads. this is bubbl3gum incase you've forgotten me... and seeing this on a semi-hiatus hold-ish status hurts. oh well, i ain't flaming you, but please do update soon. we do hail from the very same place and city so i can easily hunt you down. rawr. fine, it'll be hard but at least you'll update that way. do take care and err, hope you get to writing soon.
insane in the brain chapter 7 . 12/25/2005

I have one thing to say:


insane in the brain chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
Blue-grey sounds wonderful but my ex-best friend had amazing blue-grey eyes and now anything relatively associated with those colours in eyes makes me...[looks at shredded napkin]. oops?
jackDOC's-sparrow's-jensen's-obi's-draco's-leggy's-fred's-blue's-TERESA chapter 7 . 11/3/2005
uh hello my little one! or shall i say naughty whipped cream? um hello? don't think that i have not noticed how long your stalling! ... it makes me very angry ... and boy you know me very well when i'm angry. oh yes! "down and pick" girl. i can only take so much woman. patience is not of my strongest attributes.

anyhoers.. i was just wondering... shouldn't you have the ample and perfect inspiration now that you have real life intimate interaction with strawberries and kream! just wondering why your being so ... uh i dunno...

anways... thanks for giving me the chemistry book ;) now look what you're making me do! ever since you mentioned 'fictionpress' ... oh gosh... i found so many wonderful potential stories... food for my hopeless romantic soul... i have to stop. there will be time for this in the future. just not the day before my chemistry test. pray for my soul
Liquid chapter 7 . 10/16/2005

Hahaha just kidding. I just read this all in one go and its pretty good. Cliche, but I love cliches so its all good. Kepp up the good work and update SOON!
TRIXIE chapter 7 . 8/24/2005
HEY ... Allie hehehe hows it going ? hehe this is the UMPTEENTH time that i've read this chappie ... hehhe uhh could PLEASE just tell me wat happens after? lol that would be great hehehe
TRIXIE chapter 7 . 8/11/2005
Alysha, ARGH i'ved READ this LITERALLY 20 TIMES ah PLEASE need to find out wat happens oh LOVE YA! hehehe
BetweenLife chapter 7 . 7/10/2005
OMG i just read ur story..its so good..u have to update the next 1..i know this is long ago story but i want to find out wat happen..please..{
AsiaLi chapter 7 . 4/11/2005
W0W. Has this been building for awhile? Great job. Keep it up!
flying blind chapter 7 . 4/7/2005
hey congrat's on this story the plot is very original. This may sound very simple (I'm sorry) I really am enjoying this story and hope you update soon
Sky is Gray chapter 7 . 3/28/2005
You know, I've read a few stories with plots similar to this one, but I have to say that the background of the story is original. The tension between the two of them is really fun to read and it must be fun to write. Update some more!
Teresa Malfoy chapter 7 . 3/24/2005
hey! yes you truly are evil.. once again! but then again i will have to force you to update very soon! ü this chapter was hm.. very steamy like you put it *wink* lol and of course naturally very wittily written. you have to update very soon! i imagine sark is playing javier! i dunno... i think he fits the role! update update update update! please don't take another 54313452345 years to do it. ü anyhoo gtg! work on you next installment so i can shut up now. byebye!
henrietta chapter 7 . 3/22/2005
hey that was steamy. i liked it and i see you are strangely more romantic than i exoected. interestin. but i loved the story so far. good job on the sexual tension. its fun
Jackarooster88 chapter 7 . 3/20/2005
Great chapter! Please please please update soon!
bummertime chapter 7 . 3/19/2005
Noice story!
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