|Reviews for This|
| Debbirooni chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
...interesting. You seem to have changed what you write. More about love now?...
Well, I must say, this poem is very true about a lot of people. XP. Great job on writing down the feeling, I couldn't have said it better myself.
Great job! Keep writin'.
P.S. I was capitalizing You, because it's referring to someone (who's invisible), like a ghost, or another presence, perhaps.
| confused being99 chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
..that's so sad...but I really like it. Ton of people can probably relate to it... great job
| Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
It IS his fault if he's making u feel this way and not making an effort to fix it. It's not your fault for wanting what you deserve! Keep writing :)
| kit chapter 1 . 8/10/2004
man...that sounds just like the realtionship i just had it was a little diffrent but thats how he made me feel at times and it did only last for like a month i like this a lot good job!
| Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
This guy is just an ass. Its not you, its him. I liked this poem. Didnt much like the "fucked up" part. Showed good emotion, but ruined the poem
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
aw! *HUGS* i dunno what else to say... jez! just, hugs!