This poem is so... sweet! I agree with the other reviewer, I like the way you end each stanza with 'Abby smiles"!
Thanks for the reviews! I'd like to read your poem about 9-11 *pauses* this might sound a little juvenile, but why is it rated PG-13? I'm guessing it's just about 9-11 and a woman wanting to commit suicide, no problem, but *nervous smile* I don't think I'm allowed to read any PG-13! :
As for your reviews, everything you said was very encouraging! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! :)
I like what you said about "The Song." As I was reading this poem, the same thoughts came to me! It was just so sweet! Keep it up!
~Risa

i like the poem, i love the way you keep the reader going and i like the way you end every one with abby smiles