|Reviews for Naomi|
| My World Of Indulgence chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
that was rly amazing. beautiful work.
| White is a Sin chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
Kay that was GREAT and i think i got it.
Naomi cuts herself and hre boyfriend beats her up, you try to help?
she throws up her food
you should defiantly read hunger
| Kinchi chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
You captured the thoughts well.
| Clear-Water-Jem chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
I love it. It has a meaning to make people think and is deep.
Ryan (I'm a girl)
| lifescrewsusall chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
Another incredible poem. Great phrasing, and I really don't know what else you do to write so powerfully.
| BloodKnives CrookedRainbows chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
i really like this one. it has a certain sound or feel to it that is nice. i personally dont like the use of names but this one used names well.
| Love iz cruel chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
i think i am going to cry
| Rae of Rosemary chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
It scares me a tad bit how much like Naomi I am. Beautifully written. I can tell how much you care for your friend. Keep writing! -Ishizu.
| Aimee86 chapter 1 . 8/23/2004
This poem is so touching, so sad and shows how skilled you really are. It's a really really good poem, I enjoyed reading it a lot! Love, Aimee
| xHannahx chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
reminds me of a friend of mine. another heartfelt poem.
| xanahix4x chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
kool poem! its sort of like a story thats good! oh yeah and thanks for ur review of my poem!
| SilverAndFlames chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
Naomi liked to cut her skin open
to watch herself bleed
as though the blood would create a trail
and lead the way to her happiness.
Again those line are beautiful. Well Done. This poem speaks to ppl like me and others. It's beautiful.
| Tanika chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
oh delicious. i love this poem. i think it is my favorite of yours. i can relate to naomi big time. though i dont know her 0or what she went through i understand depression...
| happy thing chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
everything you write is so powereful. i can feel every word. never stop.
| HauntedHeart chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
Very real and powerful. Nicely Done.