|Reviews for The Captain's Prayer|
| OPatron chapter 23 . 8/31/2012
Oh my! This was quite a lovely little story! I do have a bit of a soft spot for pirates :)
| daddyscowgirl94 chapter 23 . 8/21/2011
Absolutely amazing! Have you started the sequel?
Id like to say more, but there really isn't much else to say. Though the two meager words used previously to express my liking for this story.
I think you should definitely get it published.
| PancakeRave chapter 23 . 9/1/2010
I just wanted to say that I LOVE this story. :)
| rosie chapter 23 . 7/25/2010
wow! Loved this story... its the best ive read since Ive started reading stories on this sites. Please do write the seaquel... I would love to read it.
| kycatsfan chapter 23 . 2/11/2010
I loved this story. I've always liked pirates ever since I read Treasure Island as a child. You did a great job with the characters, and I really hope you write a sequal. I want to know what happens to them.
| E. M. Isle chapter 23 . 12/30/2009
really enjoyed reading this story :D
| bubublacz chapter 23 . 9/9/2009
Short but sweet. I thought that it'd be serious at the start but didn't turn out that way, no? You're good in your writing style but I'm not so sure 'bout the flashbacks. Also I'm quite concerned that all of these happened like what? In a week? Lust might form but not love really... That's what I think, anyhow. Good job!
| bubublacz chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
I am slightly annoyed by your flashbacks but nevertheless, I'm still curious bout your story. Don Cornado is really a spiteful man. I hate him already!
| Jixnce chapter 23 . 5/28/2009
xD So she never told her brother that Don Antonio stabbed her? o.O
Avery Pierce does seem like Jack Sparrow.
; I like this fic. Is it an actual prayer, that which the story is named after?
| Pyrate Pryncess chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
Just started reading this. Seems very good. I wrote my pirate story for EXACTLY the same reason. Pirate romances are either in the trashy romance section or talk about actual pirates. I've always wanted to lose myself in a work of fiction. Anyways, will continue!
| naivete chica chapter 14 . 9/19/2008
i congratulate you for making her sympathy for avery plausible, becuase she had witnessed firsthand the cruelty he was subject to and tended to his wounds.. thus would not want him to be returned to that situation. i can believe that she would overlook his past as a criminal because of her sympathy. but to shoot a soldier to save avery? there can be no argument to support that. the soldier would have been just like her brothers and exhusband, with families who loved him.
it makes completely no sense that she would be so humanist when witnessing avery's pain, and then selfishly murdering a soldier (thus similar to her brothers and exhusband). i held so much respect for her initially, but there is no way i could like a killer. i really liked this story other than that, i loved your characterisation and dialogue.. very witty. such a shame that one thing would ruin all of that for me. i think you're a very talented writer, so do keep writing more stories! (hopefully stories where the heroine doesn't kill innocent people)
| flea writer chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
i love the originality of your work! i will definitely be reading more of this when i have time. I saw the sequel to this one and decided i should read this one first :) GOD bless
| fishertowers chapter 23 . 12/14/2007
Thank you so much for writing this story! It was humorous and kept me entertained for a few days. Congratulations on finishing it!
| slee5133 chapter 23 . 10/7/2007
i love the story, but i gotta say, i seriously dislike (lol hate would be too strong a word) the ending. but hey, i'll be looking forward to the sequel!
| toxic-noodle725 chapter 23 . 5/25/2007
oh wow. this was an amazing story. it was similar to pirates of the carribean but u added ur own twists to it. u had me loving carlotta's personality and the infamous captain avery pierce. well done! cant wait to read the sequel.