Reviews for Torn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow great job it had a nice flow even without a rhyme scheme |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this poem... like you said it portaits many emotions and is still pleasant to read even though it has no rhyming scheme. Write on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... beautiful in all its woundful emotion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kick tail buddy you did great u aint gotta have rhythm u got skill |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how the torn one is afraid to be free...It is life,isn't it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow there's so much behind this. So much pain and anger. I really like this. You remind me of an old me except ur way better at writing and all that stuff. And u've probably been through more then i have |