|Reviews for Torn|
| Raven Gray chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
wow great job it had a nice flow even without a rhyme scheme
| Emmytastic gal chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
i love this poem... like you said it portaits many emotions and is still pleasant to read even though it has no rhyming scheme. Write on.
| WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
Wow... beautiful in all its woundful emotion.
| Leo chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
Kick tail buddy you did great u aint gotta have rhythm u got skill
| Space-ghost-boy chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
I like how the torn one is afraid to be free...It is life,isn't it?
| Written In Stone chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
Wow there's so much behind this. So much pain and anger. I really like this. You remind me of an old me except ur way better at writing and all that stuff. And u've probably been through more then i have