Reviews for First Bliss
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
i like the pun on first kiss... very cute... nice imagery and descriptions... beautiful poem
Earthbound Angel 49 chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
love the imagery and the first two lines are great. It's really a great poem.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
Very beautiful and romantic. Keep up the good work.