It's beautiful...I'm very glad to hear that you're a Christian, I was wondering if there were any Christian authors on this site other than myself. Though from a few of my writings you'd never guess it... P

I've never thought about it that way. I love your analogies, they're awesome. I've written a few poems on the glory of God too, but compared to yorus, even if they don't rhyme, you just have a sweeping presence in how you write. I don't know what it is. Good job, cya

Great flow. Beautifully done! Keep up the awesome work!
Needa S.

hi! Great job again! That verse does make really great poem... I tried writing a poem about a verse in Proverbs... didn't work too well! Anyway, I liked the way you tied the whole poem with the idea of a river, and still had Jesus in there... and it was really cool, even if it didn't rhyme!
~Lauren

Great analogy! I love the last part, "My trouble only remembered as waters that have gone by." Beautiful. Short, but powerful. :)
God Blesses,
~Liz

Absolutely, stunningly beautiful. Because the truth it expresses is so wonderful and comforting, and becuase you do express it so awesomely well. The shortness makes it so effective, there aren't any more words needed. The language is so lyrical, that image of the water that frames the whole poem just fits so well. Wonderful job.

Breathtaking, you really describe the meaning of life here very well. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.