Reviews for Bleak Hole Inside
not sure yet chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
its very sad, a slightly odd flow to it, but yet...it doesnt seem so very strongly depressed as a more of resigned sadness with tinges of subdued kind of anger, hm, well, either way, i muchly enjoyed this one, nicely done
genny marie chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
I'm sorry you feel this way... but Interpol makes you feel happy...
And it's a good poem too... nicely sadly good...
XOXO
Meg
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
than blusters and I cannot shroud.
.. i think you mean blisters
I think its depression, but not clinical... very nicely written... extremely powerful
bach-player chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
good write! great expression of despondancy...i really feel it!
asyousaid chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
This is another really good one, interesting the way you use the lines to disjoint the sentances, but keep the meaning intact. "Catatonic state" is an inspired choice of words, I can empathise with that one.
Listening to "Decades" or "Candidate" might be appropriate... or maybe The Smiths "Never Had No-One Ever", which always helps.