Reviews for Perfection Is So Hidden
Libra-Gurl 01 chapter 3 . 8/3/2006
This is THE best thing I've read in a really long time! I already faved it, so I'll just wait for more chapters.

p.s. your writing style is so cool!
BeccaBoo14 chapter 3 . 7/8/2005
UPDATE! UPDATE~!

Please *pouts*

PLEASE *pouts some more*

XD
Aishwarya chapter 3 . 10/28/2004
Yay! An update! Do it Again!
Lol, yes that was a short chapter but it was quite enjoyable. I hope Naomi learns to open up soon. Tom seems like a real;ly nice guy, what bailing her out an all...
Neways, keep up the good work!
ParadoxGirl chapter 3 . 10/28/2004
Aw... Poor Tom he's only trying to help isn't he? Bless...
This story is so cool I can't believe she was thinking about taking her own life though! That's so upsetting...
This story is awesome you're a brilliant writer!
- Upadate soon!
- Luna
os chapter 3 . 10/27/2004
why is naomi so mean.. poor tom. what an entertaining conversation tho
Danica Loy chapter 3 . 10/27/2004
nice story so far. Naomi sounds a little bit a like I do when I was the new kid at school, *sigh* I only wish there was a Tom there at the same time. Continue.
budding-rose chapter 3 . 10/27/2004
That's really short! I am waiting for the next chapter hoping that it will be longer and eventful. Can you describe Tom a bit more in it? I am still rather curious what kind of a guy he soon :)
budding-rose chapter 2 . 10/26/2004
aww that's really a cute story! Please post more soon.
pandagirl11 chapter 2 . 9/17/2004
Hmm...I think you should UPDATE *hinthint* more often, don't you? P And...MAKE NAOMI STOP SHOVING TOM AWAY geez he LIKES her doesn't he why must she be AS STUPID AS CHRISTINA? P That's it...UPDATE MORE or I'll stop updating too. )
pandagirl11 chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
Hmm...lol, I've read this chapter before, just never reviewed. P So...Naomi...Naomi...Naomi...I wonder if you got that name from Nessa lol she seems to like that name. And..yes...NAOMI TOM TOGETHER FOREVER D
MySecreT chapter 2 . 8/17/2004
WOWOwOwoWOWowooww
so she's thought about death eh? so that's what it feels like to have no friends... but anyway! she's met a new guy...too bad she's too scared to be friends with him. TAKE A RISK NAOMI! -holds up flags with naomi written on-
James chapter 2 . 8/16/2004
Heh heh heh I don't blame Naomi (By the way, her name means "bitter" doesn't it...at this stage I would say it is an excellent choice! Now if Naomi's life undergoes a great transformation from bitter to sweet, it'd be a full exploitation of the name! Looking forward to it D ). If I were a new student, and some weird dude starts stalking me...I would be scared too. Like her, I would probably want to have nothing to do with him...I mean, what kind of normal person does that? I can understand introducing himself, and welcoming her, but following around and GRABBING her is a bit too much...
So she's a person without friends eh...I can relate to that (no, kidding, I can never imagine what it'd be like)...It must be very lonely...I wish she finds friends soon! Though you'd think that she'd get used to the concept of having nobody who cares...
rock 'n' roll junkie chapter 2 . 8/16/2004
Interesting...I like it. Keep up the great work!
Lemon-droPs chapter 2 . 8/16/2004
Love this story! It has a really interesting beginning!
Endowment's Seraph chapter 2 . 8/16/2004
very good. can't wait for more
~Mel
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