|Reviews for I See|
| Arcadia Lynch chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
I like the structure of this poem It gives really good imagery. The only think I find odd it the last two stanzas, The third I think feels a bit out of place and the fourth is just very creepy... Nice poem over all.
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| T. Finky chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
I love the last stanza... especially the blue of a watercolour bit. I don't know why, it just made sense!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
thats interesitng.. i like it.. the different poitns of view are amazing.. tahnks so much for your reviews
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 2 . 9/24/2004
i see that this is awesomeness!
| Project Autumn chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
There's just something about this that really stirred me. Perhaps its the poem's innocence, or maybe its how the poem is just happy, clever and light for the sake of it. Or both. :) It's very soothing.
| Twilit Exaggerance chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
I like this one alot. Good technique nine, keep writing!
| Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
Engrossing and quite intoxicating in its own way.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
i see... i see a good poem! :P:)
| Terra Tigra chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
O, this is interesting. It makes me want to paint :)
I could really see this in a colaboration with a painter or something. Let them get their own interpretation. I dunno, I'm a little crazy.
Very cool images here, I like the repetition of the color blue.