Aaawwwww no more chapters? :'(

Team Travis

I don't really get this...is the couple of the story lace/travis, lace/colby, rad/lace, or colby/travis?

i love love love love loveeeeeeeee it! Please continue! Colby is amazing i want one!

NICE! I luv this chapter!

If you don't mind, Imma probably review a short review for each chappy!

~SUL

OMG! Travis ish AMAZING! INSANELY AMAZING! Like, is he emo or something?

YAOI!

~SUL

OMG! I luv this chapter! It's so sweet and sarcastic at the same time! I luv Lace's personality!

Whoa... Raoul's there. O.o

~SUL

OMG! That was good! And mysterious! YAYZ! I luv yaoi! It's AWESOME!

But your summary was... short. And most of the fictionpress sumaries are short. I want it to stand out... be more impressive. Have you seen the summaries for fanfiction? It's way different. So... yeah. The only reason I found this fic is bbecause I searched in "slash". Add the word "yaoi" or "m/m" or some other indications. -ramblerambleramble-

SUL is reading on...

~SUL

Wow, at first, I thought that Travis was also going for Colby. i'm glad he's changed his mind. Lace and Travis are such a hot couple. Colby and Lace, not so much .

At first, I was discouraged by the lack of a summary. It didn't tell me anything about the story. Is it a high school fic, a business fic, a fantasy fic? Does the summary tell me anything about the main character? In the end, though, I fell in love with it, and your surprises always kept me on my toes.

love it!

Are you still making this? I love it :D

A pice of fabric. A type of cheese. A slang word for cool. Damn, where do you kids come up with these crazy names.

Nice concept. Immensely sympathetic storyline. And while this is in no way a criticism, your storyline definitely follows the teen trend (lol, obviously from the ages). But just from the voice and personalities that limits your audience, because frankly, I'm so over teenage whining and have been since I was a teenager. Meh, some people don't like tomatoes. Well written all the same.

Great chapter! I really hope that Colby and Lace get together soon. Travis annoys the hell out of me though...but anyways please update! :D

Colby is secretly a genius. I knew it.

Travis needs to get a some friends. seriously.

Lace should get a gun license right about now.

great story

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Wow, that was great...

Your characters are probably the best developed in the story and personally, I think Travis is a bit of an ass, but... I still sorta like him. O_o

Woot, can't wait for the chapter where Lace and Colby are alone... :P (I really really really want to send anomynous letters telling them that the other likes them back, but I guess if I did, then no story right?)