Reviews for Indication Of Feeling
trying2findmyself chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
I wish I could write the same way you do. Keep everything flowing. Your great.
the tuesday after chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
*smiles* You can tell when someone plays the guitar. This needs to be sung. I don't really give rating but under the lyrics section, it's scoring pretty high. Do you compose music as well?

L.
Sarah chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
Wow very nicely done Tommy...Better than the love poetry i write
Fallen V chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
sad...brilliant twist and i like the rhythm...someday..you'l find someone who lets u be free
x
Bleeding Ink chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
Oh wow. Damn right a twisted ending. I thought it was going to be so sweet and thank you-ey. But a controlling person, even when trying to help is suffocating.. I like the rhythm, too. The rhymes make it flow very fast. Though, maybe about two lines seemed broken up.. but that's inevitable. Excellent, spiteful poem.