|Reviews for Circus Town|
| Kneecap chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
I looked back at the title once I'd finished reading and saw 'Circus Town' as the title, I guess that's what 'CT' stands for xD.
Anyways, I LOVED the imagery you used for this. The drip-dropping was a beautiful image. Some lines just seemed a little stale though. Like "Just like he did." - if we knew more about the father figure, that line would be very powerful, as it seems like a good old-fashioned ironic line. But as it is, it's just too early for it.
I see you haven't updated this for 4 years :(, so I'm going to save myself from false hope by favouriting this, and just hope, that if you someday read this, you'll know that you are a very talented writer :D.
| Limited Edition chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
I can't deny that this one is a favorite of mine, and I can't stop angsting because you won't continue it.
| Drizzle chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
this is a really good beginning. you painted a very vivid picture of the main character. please write more