Reviews for Through the Night
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
It's come to this, and the intensity,

Of love and pain make many things occur,

Like war bursting upon a calm spring day,

When every hope had dreams of blossoms white;

So sometimes what's inside blooms on outside,

As heart tries to emcompass everything,

And fill with warmth even death's winter cold,

A remedy and tonic unexplained.
Numitor chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
This is fantastic, I love it! In this case, ignore what I said about "crying" in poetry, because it fits really well here... and it rhymes, but it maintains interest with the vocabulary you use... excellent!
Echo Despise chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
i like this, a sad but true poem that i know i think about all the time.
randomwordz chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
wow this is a really good poem... I really can grasp the emotion and pain and love that you bring out here... i know this pain and this is just a great peice of writing, keep it up and if you have a chance please reveiw me!
changingstill chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
wow...i can relate to most of it...nicely put...
IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
That's sad! It's a great poem, though, I love the rhyming!