|Reviews for Through the Night|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
It's come to this, and the intensity,
Of love and pain make many things occur,
Like war bursting upon a calm spring day,
When every hope had dreams of blossoms white;
So sometimes what's inside blooms on outside,
As heart tries to emcompass everything,
And fill with warmth even death's winter cold,
A remedy and tonic unexplained.
| Numitor chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
This is fantastic, I love it! In this case, ignore what I said about "crying" in poetry, because it fits really well here... and it rhymes, but it maintains interest with the vocabulary you use... excellent!
| Echo Despise chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
i like this, a sad but true poem that i know i think about all the time.
| randomwordz chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
wow this is a really good poem... I really can grasp the emotion and pain and love that you bring out here... i know this pain and this is just a great peice of writing, keep it up and if you have a chance please reveiw me!
| changingstill chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
wow...i can relate to most of it...nicely put...
| IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
That's sad! It's a great poem, though, I love the rhyming!