Reviews for The Girl In The Door |
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![]() ![]() there better be more then 4 pages! im gonna me so sad while reading the last page ;(:p((keep up the good work)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool, but really wierd |
![]() ![]() awesome ending/cliffhanger, you really went helen keller on this one, keep writing. |
![]() ![]() Woah. Good story, and the only things I really noticed were a couple spelling/grammar mistakes, like a few mising commas, etc. Otherwise, great story so far, and I'll keep reading. |
![]() ![]() this a very good story i giv out of 10. but i think the whole evil step-mother, family that keeps moving around, im gay but im not i just said that thing as all been done before |
![]() ![]() ![]() o, what a cliffhanger! please continue soon! |