Reviews for On July 29th, 2004
Jo Madden chapter 1 . 12/15/2004
I am so sorry to hear about this. I know it's late but my thoughts and prayers are with you and his family. Once again, I am so sorry.
Kaylee Sabrina Green chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
Wow I am so sorry you had to go through that. It is a beautiful poem 4 stars (Out of 4) excellent job and I know that this doesn't take away your pain but I hope it helps some. Kaylee
Dimenticata chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
Wow. I wonder how he died...
tripletxtreme chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
This is so sad. Poor guy. Now I feel like crying too. Deeply moving, such a sorrowful poem.I like this.
DevilsDream-15 chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
I almost cried this poem is so sad. Add the powerful language and imagery (my word of the day)and you've got one awesome poem.
Giraffe 63 chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
That's so sad, in a way that is both loud and quiet. Nice work getting it into words, though.
DeathKiss chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
I liked the beginning and the ends, but around the middle I sorta got lost. I can tell you felt something real and didn't just make this out of nothing to do.
Thanks for the review!
-DeathKiss-
OJW chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
that is sad.. yeah.
peace and love manz.
Hannah Elizabeth Harry chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
Woah thats powerful. Im so sorry about your friend. He would be proud of that poem. Please RR my poems x