The moment I saw the word floppy I knew I had to check the date on this and to think I'm reading it 13 years after it was completed.. DAMN! This has definitely got to be one of the oldest stories I've read on here.. which is why it's so interesting! I like the take so far, it's interesting and the way it's written also has my attention. I think there was more tell than show at the start though but so far so good!

This story is awesome. I don't know if it can happen in real life but Chris' inner group of friends that screams of total badass. You know you have the genius, the athlete, the talented, the writer, the beauty, the popular darn I wish im part of that circle. Oh, and i dont know if im just the one who notice this but what happened to Nicole's uncle? the one she seems to be avoiding. That angle of the story was just drop and was never pursued. I thought for awhile when Chris' past was revealed that the two of the shared the same experience. Still, great story, characters and ending. I enjoyed it.

So both of them have 'demons'? Seems a little dysfunctional

This seems really good. You sure do have some talent, but this is a little sloppy.

This kid is obsessed with rape

Robin is two years older than chris, cuz shes a senior. Chris was 9 wen she was almost-raped. Henry was 19. Henry and robin were dating. ... ... ... yeeeeaaah.

Just finished read this story... Maybe could have a better end but still LOVED IT

Awesome story! :D Love it!

O_O

Aha! I was right! :P I like Cindy already.

They continued flipping through the pages, watching as Chris slowly grew older. There was a picture of Chris when she was five, holding a snail at her mother's face. Catalina, of course, looked like she was shrieking in extreme fear. There was another picture of Catalina and other older women from Chris's family screaming in fear at her plate that contained a couple of worms and one little frog. The picture next to that one was of Chris when she was seven, grinning next to two other girls, who to Nicole's shock, were Tresha and Kadan.

I think Tresha and Kadan are her cousins right? :P Can't really remember.. :D I like this part of the chapter the most. xD Lil' monsta. :D

not logged in! :P OMG I WAS WONDERING WHY THAT PERSON ON THE INTERNET COULD READ MINDS. xD She's that cousin of hers ain't she. mhm.

LOL. The peacock. xD Best line in this chapter: "And Nicole sadly noted that little kids beating on each other, running around and punching whoever was near, now she knew why Chris was so aggressive." LMFAO. Lastly, love this chapter. :D Reminds me of my family. Just.. less rich. xD

Owned. I want a billionaire friend. :D

Simple Plan is effin awesome. ;P