I like how nicole and chris are both there for each other. That's really good to have in this story.

I still like your story. can you please write more?

Oh how I love your story...let me count the ways...wait there's about a billion reasons that I love this story and counting them would take me forever! Still love it, cant wait for the next chapter...

OMG! OMG! OMG! Best story ever! Please keep going...I love this story so much!

I still love your story! Sorry I haven't been reviewing more, its just I'm not really supossed to be on the comp so when I'm done reading your story for the day i have to get off lest my parents catch me on. You're a great writer, I hope you update soon!

WOW! I'm just shocked and impressed at how good this story is. It's almost as if Nicole and chris have a certain power over each other to make the other person feel a certain way...in the sense of how much they love each other and how much they desire each other. The longer you prolong that desire for each other, the more they both want it and the more the reader wants to read it. That's the kinda power that you have.

Very intense. It's an amazing story. You'd think both Nicole and Chris have trust issues with everything thas going on around them. Keep going!

Look! They're starting to really desire each other and want each other really bad. It's like they cant be in the same room without touching each other in some way. Now when they start doing things like that in public-like sitting at a lunch table with friends and they start to put their hands on each others knee without anyone else at the table knowing, then we know that first they really love each other and second, they really cant go without touching each other or being away from each other for a long amount of time.

what? that's it so far? no way! update, please! your writing flow has improved dramatically. your sentences used to be too long, sort of like a whole paragraph in one huge sentence, but you've moved away from that now. it makes reading it easier. This is such a magnificantly well-built piece of writing! i can't believe it, it really is great. i cannot wait for the next installment!

ok i'm only up to ch 14 so far but i love the way you've built the story up! and i'm really really hoping you wrote about chris and nicky's sex life in the upcoming chapters. i shall have to write my own if you didn't. this, so far, rocks!

I really like how this chapter showed them bothin getting a lot closer together and more in love then they were before. Excellent story, please keep it going. I'm interested in seeing how close they both get and I'm also interested in seeing what conflicts they encounter along the way.

I need more...like the story so much that I already want more to it. Thanks

It's very exciting story and very thrilling to read...there's always the bumps in a relationship and apparently nicole and chris are finding them rite now...I do enjoy how when something goes wrong with chris, it makes nicole care for her more and love her more and it makes their relationship stronger.

this stories da bomb! Love the chap. Keep on wit dis one!

uh..thrilling...really interesting...wanna know whats about this mandy.. but i hope not to much crisis.. i lik the relationship between nicole and chris.. its so loevely. cant wait for the next chapter