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NP user chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
nice poem! :-D
Forever and Eternity,
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
Bluster - Means 1) Turbulence or noisy confusion.
2) To blow in loud, violent gusts, as the wind during a storm.
Lets read my poem over again shall we... what am I expressing throughout the whole poem? A noise (ie: PERSON) that won't leave me alone. A 'noise' that I feel is infecting me. ) Just thought I would clarify. (Sorry if I sound rude right now, I'm in a cunt-ish mood.)
Jenna x
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 2 . 8/14/2004
i like this, its cool
ByFireAndMoonlight chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
Hmm this is interesting. Maybe change from them to you, and back to them. Like say I don't know why you're doing this, or somthing like that. I'm not quite sure what your going for, but don't worry the idea's will come to you. Be strong till then. _
pacopuppy chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
hm, i like it so far. i'm not sure where you should go with this. i stole the idea with the letters thing :-). yours is a lot better, though.