Reviews for Dawn
vish chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
make a song outta this! if u dont i will! dunt worry i'll still give u credit, but these words cant go without music. i wont let it happen
eM chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
i love it... it's so mysterious, yet with an uderlying force. i especially like
"the sun's tears light the shadows"
"the mists divulge an ancient lie
as the smoke hits the floor"
keep writing!
ByFireAndMoonlight chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
I think (I warn this may shound stupid) That it's about falling into darkness and hate, and seeing a light. Then when you find it the sun finally comes up and your free. Or maybe not . . . Oh well I'm just werid like that. Good job