Reviews for Be Careful
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
This is so very sad and vulnerable; so perfectly considered for the chosen subject.
Very Well Done
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
aw. Don't you hate it when you have to be so damn cautious? Especially with your heart. Why can't everyone just be the person they appear to be? WEll, good poem. nice ending.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
a nice poem, cool.
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 8/15/2004
aww. i like that!
I'm giving you my heart
it's all I have to give
but It's very fragile
i like those 3 lines. great job!