|Reviews for Original Sin|
| Riddle of the Sphinx chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
n.n I really like your writing style, your rhymes flow with out seeming forced or straying from the idea. Just one thing ; I think you meant "seems" and not "seams" for the last word. "Seams" is like.. the line where two peices of cloth are sewn together, lol, great poem though.
| orangepen23 chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
erm, it's okay. The last word is spelled wrong. It's seems. It doesn't really do anything for me, but maybe that's just because your heart isn't in it. I dunno. R&R my stuff if you're bored.