Reviews for One Last Kiss
orangepen23 chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
That was sad. The flow was a little awkward in places, but overall it was very good. It sounds like abuse to me...
Evan Manchester chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
ooh... kinky. ;) Just kidding.
Thank you so much for your review on "Forgive Me, Father."
I like this poem, I like how it doesn't rhyme. I am familiar with the subject matter as well so it is interesting.