Reviews for I Knew You, I Need You
Gutter-Massacre chapter 2 . 9/5/2004
Contrats! I like it so far. And please don't abandon. Tis good! I swear!
Heather Drake chapter 2 . 9/5/2004
Ridley...nice name. It feels like you rushed this a little. Take some time and go back over it, pick up some of the little mistakes that can be so disctracting to the reader. Other than that, I'm liking this. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Heather Drake chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
Hm...interesting. Does the main character (or anyone for that matter)get a name in the next instalement? Your writing is very clear, easy to follow, but some random punctuation marks undermine this. It might just be html mistakes or stupid errors, but just thought I'd mention it. I'm curious as to who these abductors are and will be back to read more when you update.