I found this to be an excellent story and would love to see more writers like you. While some spelling issues did come up, this did not detract from the overall reading experience. I give this 5 stars. *

Besides the occasional odd switch in POV... I thought this was an excellent story with lots and lots and lots of plot! Great job!

Fuck YEA! O there is going to be tension between akito and rae. tee hee i love it.

That was a really really good chapter. I got a little distracted during the make-out scence tho. Hehe i wonder why.

Yay! IM hooked again. Ill prob be all caught up by monday. Woot.

I forgot how fucking awesome your story was! hehehe its getting exciting. I love the cliffhanger endings

"So Savea opted for these leather boots, which she found felt like slippers."

hahaha where did you ever think of that?

on another note FUCK YEA! I see you unraveled Savea's power _

Ah im bak into the story! I just remembered that i had already read chap 14, so onward to 15!

So you'll post Book 2 under a different name? Okay..Nice ending to the first part.

If you'd like, I'd be willing to beta book 1 for you. (My e-mail addy is available from my profile.)

Livi

You need to check how you're making your POV breaks-they aren't showing up.

Livi

Great new chapter, im dieng to see the next one. Nice spin on rae's charector, but im kinda afraid to see what will hapen with rae now.

Three cheers for creative juices! Nice look at Rae...

Livi

Very eloquent writing. I look forward to another chapter

Who is it?

Livi

This story is awesome. I love this chapter. I used to like Rae the best and could relate to him for the relentless sarcasm. But now Rowan is the coolest. Yea and there seems to be no hint whatsoever to whom the the person is in the end. But anyway. Who ever reads this will have the most interest time because this shows the everyday intricate actions and thought of some of people in the most extreme conditions. In this case ITs being vampires. This story is the best. Thank you switch