Reviews for The Pack |
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![]() ![]() Why is this story rated M? The story is funny . But not once was vixen and Clarie intimate . They never kissed . & that's WACK |
![]() ![]() Why is this rated M ? More like rated T . Change your ratings |
![]() ![]() ![]() Way to get and ending left hanging. Make an epilouge! Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Probably my favorite chapter! |
![]() ![]() What the hell is this ending? |
![]() ![]() ![]() "The end" There's no sequel? Continuation? I love it! But question: how did the newbies to the pack react to her "knowing" did they know? Anyways I liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's over? Just like that, it's over? It was definitely an AWESOME story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story overall. ending seemed a bit hasty but I liked the plot line and the characters. Quick thinking on your part about how to explain the changing! YAY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my fucking god! I'm friggen crying over her! How could you DO that! You friggen awesome/horrible person! You killed off the best characters... well some of them! Justun and um... the lady I can't spell... and the twins! Especially the twins! |
![]() ![]() ![]() because you did! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...i am crying...that was amazing...i love this story so much...i am torn that so many of the Pack have died but...im happy that some survived...Thank you for pulling me into this world. I can't thank you enough...Love it and love your writing... ~THomas~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait what? O_O The story ended? What? Im sorry but i wasnt ready for it to end. There must be a sequel. I love Vixen and im really sad Mickey died and that Justus is hurt [ ! Please write a sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow the ending is ...well... sad... why must the one which is dead are the one you write most about is heartbreaking... but still nice story keep it up. -best wish from me |
![]() ![]() Seriously this story was going really great until this chapter. One I would have really like Justus to start something with Covo and two why didn't we get at least one kiss between Claire and Vixen. |