Reviews for The Pack
Guest chapter 32 . 5/29/2014
Why is this story rated M? The story is funny . But not once was vixen and Clarie intimate . They never kissed . & that's WACK
Guest chapter 29 . 5/29/2014
Why is this rated M ? More like rated T . Change your ratings
AlyssaChu chapter 35 . 5/11/2014
Way to get and ending left hanging. Make an epilouge! Please?
Northfacegrl5 chapter 26 . 1/29/2014
Probably my favorite chapter!
Guest chapter 35 . 1/11/2013
What the hell is this ending?
chibi-Clar chapter 35 . 12/23/2012
"The end"
There's no sequel?
I love it!
But question: how did the newbies to the pack react to her "knowing" did they know?
Anyways I liked it!
Xx Vintage xX chapter 35 . 12/14/2011
It's over? Just like that, it's over? It was definitely an AWESOME story!
Cecily Mitchell chapter 35 . 1/14/2011
Good story overall. ending seemed a bit hasty but I liked the plot line and the characters. Quick thinking on your part about how to explain the changing! YAY!
Charlee Rayne chapter 35 . 12/28/2010
Oh my fucking god! I'm friggen crying over her! How could you DO that! You friggen awesome/horrible person! You killed off the best characters... well some of them!

Justun and um... the lady I can't spell... and the twins! Especially the twins!
Charlee Rayne chapter 11 . 12/28/2010
because you did!
INACTiVEZXC chapter 35 . 9/4/2010
...i am crying...that was amazing...i love this story so much...i am torn that so many of the Pack have died happy that some survived...Thank you for pulling me into this world. I can't thank you enough...Love it and love your writing...

LostarielHarris chapter 14 . 7/10/2010
Dead Deactivated chapter 35 . 8/10/2009
Wait what? O_O The story ended? What? Im sorry but i wasnt ready for it to end. There must be a sequel. I love Vixen and im really sad Mickey died and that Justus is hurt [ ! Please write a sequel
WindLessNiteZ chapter 35 . 7/14/2009
wow the ending is ...well... sad... why must the one which is dead are the one you write most about is heartbreaking...

but still nice story keep it up.

-best wish from me
Bionic chapter 35 . 7/10/2009
Seriously this story was going really great until this chapter. One I would have really like Justus to start something with Covo and two why didn't we get at least one kiss between Claire and Vixen.
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