|Reviews for My Last Day|
| nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
Very emotional. 1 or 2 typos... u say 'and dose he care' and earlier u say 'there hand I clutch' it should be 'thier' or 'their'... not sure how its spelt... I before e accept after c... hmm. Anyway great work and thanks for the review.
Stones decay, words last
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
Love it, I can completly feel what your saying, keep up the good work.