Reviews for Accurate Loyalty
NirvanaChicas chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
i like how u describe things so well
Alison
Aimee86 chapter 1 . 8/23/2004
Just like all the other poems I've read from you, this one is really good too, I loved the last bit, it truly touched me! Keep it up, Love, Aimee
The Ever Changing Tonks chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
good poem
Nails For Your Crucifix chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
The flows very nicely. It's got beautiful imagery at some points and very nice emotion for the entire thing. simply a nice job.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
wow.. very powerful piece... awesome job
Angels Cry Bloody Tears chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
one word: breathtaking
Nev Jee chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
Wow. You have a terrific talent for creating a picture of emotion... I felt what you were feeling through your writing. It was very sincere and amazing to read. Only thing I might improve on: if the veil is vanishing wouldn't he be visible again? Probably just a misunderstanding on my part; otherwise, great writing, keep it up.
Thanks for your review!
soulofsilence chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
wow! that was great. Love it :)
I got a feeling in my stomach that I get when i read great stuff.
thanks for writting :)
Elizabeth
elven-lady22 chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
You have an amazing talent. You draw the reader in so that they feel like they are in your shoes. I wish I had your skill. Nonetheless, fantastic job, and I'll keep checking to see if you have anything new for me to get weepy over..
Kalopsia chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
beautiful poem! beatiuful and well done. The metaphors exceptionally enhance the poem. I just love it! Great work.