|Reviews for Rise|
| drblueface chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
Thats so sweet! _I felt a shiver reading this-
Keep it up! Fantastic!
| darylchew chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
| Starfire Rhapsody chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
This is amazing. It's full of such emotion and feeling behind it. I love it along with your others.
| Ash chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
I'm only just becoming familiar with your work but man am I impressed. You express yourself (especially the rain image)so well. Bows*
| guitarzac chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
This is really good, I like how the images just appear in my mind from what you write...-zz
| Kaiyoro chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
You honor me too much. Your work is amazing. It's really enveloping with your word use and style. This is an awesome poem. Thanks for checking me out.
| Lia Silverfrond chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
This is very interesting, I like this poem, it's amazing, and powerful. I'm bored. oh well, It's the curse of a short attention span.
| Militant-Antibody chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
Again I gotta say this poem was made for me by two lines, though this time it was the last two. I enjoy the slightly off kilter rhythmn you get going in this piece; lines stop just after they feel they should, which strangely enough builds and moves naturally. If I read this poem it just flows better every time. I enjoy how the sentiment is expressed, and again the last two lines(in their simplicty) are the absolute picture of a perfect ending. Another for the favs.
| Zainab chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
I'm glad this one had a sweet ending. Your writing has this soft feel to it, really nice. Keep it up!
| kingsweet chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
Wow! I am amazed at how well you can write! It's so touching. P. for your reviews! I really appreciate it!
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
Wonderful image of woman as rain and love. m
| bach-player chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
loved "midnight without it's moon"...just wonderful!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
wow.. very nicely written peice, such a sweet ending,... awesome job!
| Angels Cry Bloody Tears chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
Awesom, powerful and passionate. Really from the heart. It is a beautiful poem, I applaud you..
| boytoy13 chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
I really liked this poem. it almost had a spiritual feeling to it. nice job.
PS: thnx for the nice reviews :)