|Reviews for A Distorted Image|
| julianmarq chapter 9 . 11/9/2011
This is story was amazing, sad and beautiful.
I'd love to know how it continues but I can't buy your book because I live in a hellhole in South America. I tried sending you an email but it didn't work with the one you left. Hope you get this.
| lijuan chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
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| HoldYourDreams chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
| Bam-There You Go chapter 9 . 8/29/2008
i dont get it, so is Holden dead or not?
| AndWeWatchThisCityBurn chapter 9 . 6/2/2007
Oh my god. This is such a good story but I didn't expect this to happen! It is so sad I started crying. Is Holden dead or alive? I can't tell. :( This is a great story.
| pebbles-05 chapter 9 . 3/3/2007
im so confused. did he die? is this story finished?
this story is awesome!
| sapphic-delusion chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Good start here. Just a suggestion, though: If you're going to have different people talking, either put things different people say in separate paragraphs, or at least make the paragraphs shorter. It gets a little confusing otherwise.
| Riley Kathleen chapter 9 . 3/1/2006
great story, I like it a lot. It's written well too. It's rather sad, but the end of that chapter confused me...I thought he was dead, but is he? or is the story not finished yet...?
| christal chapter 9 . 9/7/2005
i thought this story was really good thanks for submitting it
| angel4evaxxxxx chapter 9 . 8/30/2005
wow great story. I loved it and its so incredibly sad but its a great story and well written
| Washer chapter 9 . 3/14/2005
That was a really sad story, I liked it a lot. I think perhaps in the beginning chapter or two you could've tried to play up Holden's poor behavior prior to meeting Jessica. Also, I think the fact that one of them didn't like math and the other didn't like English was a little too fortuitous. Lastly, the ending seemed to tie ends together too well. Putting in such a sad ending and leaving a light on? If so inclined, please e-mail as to your motives; I'm intrigued. Not to be negative, though! I thought the rest of the story was great, and very poignant. Definitely didn't see the ending coming. Keep writing, you're sure to receive widespread recognition someday!
| donmike chapter 9 . 9/4/2004
THAT WAS SOME GOOD SHIT. I havent read a full story on this site in months and this one was SO worth it...u should b damn proud for having this.
KEEP IT UP
| I-fail-english chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
EXCELLENT story. Keep up the good work!
| Eresteizulim chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
this is really good! please continue! i must know what happens next!
xoxo Rachel xoxo
| SadisticKitty chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
I was just browsing and your story caught my eye. I like the idea, but I'd like to point out, when someone new start's talk, it's a new paragraph. Other then that, kudos to you!