Omg i love this story please make another one but with the same characters i was crying and astonished make more please.

Wow his was AMAZING I WAS CRYING AND SMILING SOMETIMES AT THE same time

Seattle is full of art schools. Seattle Art Institute. Evergreen has a serious art department. UW has one. The list goes on and on. Just thought that I should mention that.

Of course, since they didn't think about that, Emo-boy is a jerk for putting his own desires above her future. If he really cared he should encourage her to follow her dream and then get together.

Dad will not be happy. Emo-boy should fear for his life. Sounds like fun.

Awesome story :)

amazing story its a perfect love story :D

wowwwww i loved every minute of reading this!, I liked everything about it from the plot to the characters and of course matt was my favourite hehee, well done on this story you have a great skills thanksss :)

The last chapter got me rather emotional D ;

OOOH! OH MAI GAWWWSHHHH... THE ONLY REASON IM ACTING LIKE THIS IS CAUSE IM RUNNING ON HALF AN HOUR SLEEP AND EATING ICE... OHH MAII GAWWSSHHH

Light and Frothy. That's what comes to mind.

I'm a mazed at how...alive your characters are. I mean, the story is all narrative, and yet they stand there right in front of you , ready to slap you if you don't believe in them. Completely grand.

It was a refreshing read. Simple, and enjoyable, yet I wonder if perhaps you could have gone into more depth with it. I mean, Matt's mother is non-existent, Carla and Brandon are BIG parts of the story, and not well developed at all, and Angel's art-well, it wasn't there. except when she burnt it (That was just good.), So it didn't really seem that giving up art school was that difficult.

What I did like was the interaction between Angel and her Father. you did it perfectly, not hurried, but not expected development.

Any how, I should read the sequels before i really comment on the plot. Sorry if I was over harsh, it happens sometimes. I don't mean to be...mean, but there we are. Keep writing!

heya

so, usually, when I review, I do it at the end of the story, but hey. I'll make an exception.

Cpontent wise, ther's nothing wrong with this chappie (in fact, It's getting better and better)but i do think some format issues...

when switchuing to Matt's perspective, perhaps include a line of stars or something, instead of an A'N, keep the continuity.

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and I think junkie doesn't have a "y". But then, I spelt need wrongly until i was 14.

Aww, I'm SO late getting into this story, duh, right?, but I really, REALLY loved this entire story. Read it all between lastnight and now. Would have finished it yesterday (damn internet troubles) but I finished it, YaY! And i will be starting the new one tomorrow.

Well, not new.

The sequel!.!.!

Which excites me to no end! _

I love this, because when it comes to Fathers and their "little girls" they act more like prepubescents than we do. Not wanting us to grow up, hah! I'm 19 and I'm still dealing with my Dad being an ass when I pull for that much more independence.

I can relate to this, which is why i love it SO much!

Well actually...the sky IS sometimes green in The Batman...uh...nevermind..

I like Matt the new boy.