Reviews for Addiction
night62611 chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
vivid, and real... I'm left with a bit of silence after reading this
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
I like this one, really discriptive!
xHannahx chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
i love the imagery of a "plastic smile". the whole poem reminds me of my friend. the repetition of "pale" really works there, it just adds something - im not sure what, and makes the last line complete.
Han
acccountkiller chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
*shudders* very very nice...you might've noticed I like descriptions, and let me say the description makes this a very, very powerful poem. The repetition in the end 'pale, pale skin' makes it sound like an echo, some deadly whisper...very nice! Love, Mia
graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
this is basically the reason any cutter cuts. liked the flow of the words.
IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
I like the analogies and the imagery of this poem. The cutting references are chilling again, but awesome poem!
pacopuppy chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
aw, sad
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
*excuse the language in advacne* FUCK THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! Holy Shit Gurl! That was awesome. It was so damn touching and sad and depressing adn descriptive and real and relatable and ... yeah end of list here bc i could go on forever... wow... amazing job! one of my favs for sure that youve written. its a great piece! ::)