Reviews for Shattered Dreams
Victim of the Wraith chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
OMG! The reminded me of that day at your house when we were playing DDR and the top of the oil lamp fell. I'm sorry. That's just a big coincidence.

I love how touching it is, and how you got to the point where everything falls down but you don't really care because you're with one person.

It's short and sweet and an amazing peice.

...forensicsciencefreak
Locomotive Breath chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
i liked that a lot it's flow was choppy but at te same time it added to the effect. nice job!
Oath chapter 1 . 8/23/2004
Great poem shnizznin. I love the line "my hands tied behind my back" it definitly renforces the summary. update soon!
IHavePizza chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
Hm. Nice use of symbolism there.