Reviews for If Only
tangled up in blue chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
i love the lines"if only i had an instruction booklet in life, i would have been a guaranteed success"
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
i love this! very nice...*going under FAVES*
Mormon Princess 1 chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
Good job I like it a lot!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
wow.. that last line was unexpected... I cant quite tell who died the narrator or her fiance, but still a powerful ending... awesome poem ::adds to favs::
sugarandspice91 chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
I really like your wording, it sounds cool!
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
Breathtaking emotion, really a good read. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.