Reviews for Time Ticks Away
deathfairy20 chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
YES
Quid chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
Nice imagery, I liked the way you showed time as sort of an endless flow, ticking on no matter what we think or do.
Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
Amazing descriptioun! "lustrous moon" "abyss of night" "clouds of my dreams"... that was great imagery, so pretty! . Overall, awesome poem, I really liked reading it.
Write on!
SugarLuva chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
Very good. Quite deep but ending on a happy note. I like it.
Thank you so much for reviewing my poems. It is much appreciated.
Sugar
Mr. McPierce chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
A very nice poem! It has that endless circle effect that I like to read. It's also got rain, which I've always enjoyed reading about. To me it symbolized cleansing of the soul. All in all it was a very well written poem! good job!
-Mr McPierce