|Reviews for The People I See|
| Captain Swoots chapter 3 . 1/25/2005
| tabiboi chapter 3 . 1/4/2005
Interesting-like the detail-maybe try to guess as to what their life is too? Just a thought.
| tabiboi chapter 2 . 1/4/2005
I like how you put "for only one person/can control your life/and that person is/you." I think more detail would make it more interesting, though...
| tabiboi chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
Don't you just love to people watch? It's so much fun.
| Strikeout chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
What an interesting, original idea! I really liked this. I see people at my university that make me stop and think like that. I really liked this
| Helgmelia chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
Very nice description. I liked the "flimsy $100 dress" line - good and sardonic.