Reviews for Make A Move
xXMercutioXx chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
omg...that hurts so bad...but i cant help but laugh...lol
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
heyy...pretty good.
Dimenticata chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
whoa. I must say, its extremely well written. It's easy to imagine...but then again I read at a really high level, so its not THAT hard for me to imagine that...but still...
Infinite Abyss chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
That was pretty good. It was very well written and the dream sequence thing was a good surprise. Nice job.
tehrave-deactivated chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
With me as Chris and the genders reversed, this would be an odd portrait of my life... With my best friend's suicide attempt and everything...
Anyhow, I liked this. The twist where it was just her imagination was unexpected. It was well written with a strong structure, like a good story should be. Very well done.
Moon860 chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
this is kinda scary, 'cause my best friend is also a boy and i also kinda like him, haven't got the courage to do what amanda did though...
anywhos, how'd ya get the inspiration to do this kind o' story huh? it happened to you to?
review y story to answer plz!
back to the story, it was good, i liked the detail of her thoughts and feelings the best, also, the music titles you added sort of fit in with the whole scene.
Brilliant
keep in touch!
Moon860