Reviews for Milk
Zakiue chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
Haha, that was cute. I liked it. You had a few extra syllables in there that threw off the rhythm, but that didn't really affect it much. I love the first stanza. :)
Earthbound Angel 49 chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
corny but good for a 12 year old. it does manage to stay in line with the story which is great.
~Ebony
GhostHelwig chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
That was so cool! I really do love your poetry! And you wrote that when you were twelve? God, my stuff sucked at that age - you had talent. And of course, you still do. You rock. I really, sincerely hope you continue with this. Your gift is intense. Use it.
DeletedUser chapter 1 . 10/17/2002
Wow, that was hilarious and perfectly written. How old are you, again?
ChipsNdip chapter 1 . 1/9/2001
I loving it, Not too corny-kinda cute!