|Reviews for Crisscrossing Staffs|
| bahaghari chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
Loved the jumbling of letters in line 4, i can visualize how everything's so mixed up-animates the emotions portrayed here.
| breakme chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Im adding you to my favorites... k? This rocks. As for the first commenter... the line 'mnixig iton oen aonrteh' was obviously scrambled on purpose. And its brilliant.
| Infinity Plus One chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
Wonderful rhyming; honestly, this poem works wonders!"makingthingsruntogethermnixig iton oen aonrteh"Wonderful! This is going on my Favourite Stories list.
By the way,"Number of stories archived: 218 Highest review count for one story: 214 (Gay Is Okay!) Lowest review count for one story: 1 (Various pieces) Total number of reviews: 2600 (ish...I don't really feel like counting). Reviews submitted: 15 signed, probably about 150 more unsigned. Number of people who have me on their Favorite Authors list: 171"HOLY SHIT.
| pleasecometrue chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
That's awesome. I really like this one, great write ;)
| nl1 chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
about my essay. I'm a nintendo fan too. But still you might be right about your review. Sorry. I am a video game fan. I just thought the reason I was doing bad in school because it was video games. Anyway good, poem.
| Helgmelia chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
I liked your creative touches to the "run together" and "mixing into" lines. They work both visually and conceptually. They're definitely the highlight of the poem for me.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
I like it.. especially the sesond, third and fourth line.. very cool poem!
| lilyqueen777 chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
this line has a mistake: "mnixig iton oen aonrteh" i think it's supose to be this "mixing it on one another." please fix it. other than that I like the poem! and I like how the third line is all together like one whole word.