Reviews for Love Hurts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow cool story! keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah! Let those chapters keep coming! More, more, moree... hahahaha _- |
![]() ![]() Nice! i like it! _ ooh! looks like sumbody's jealous! lol plz update soon! _ really love ur work |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice i'm liking it alot ur a really good writer so keep writing and can't wait for the next chapter *WiccanPUNKgrl* |
![]() ![]() Oh my goodness,it's quite good so far, I can't wait to see how the story goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start so far! I can't wait to see how the plot develop. You have given Charlie quite the personality so far and a backstory... which is good. Now i must see what happens with her and Jaden. Well keep writing and please review my fics when you can. Continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. and i can relate with Jaden i've had a crush on one of my best friends forever, and she's not "That way" so yeah... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ::collapses:: I'm not alone after all! I can really relate to Jaden. Your characters are so real! They're so believable. Please write more relatively soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story, update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a great story so far, and has TONS of potential. i really like it _, so update, update, update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, great so far, it sounds like you are a really good writer. I like your writing style and the characters sound awesome! It's great that you always leave the reader wanting more, but please update soon and often. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa! I am SO sorry for that. The second last paragraph should say,"and these kids are about to find out just how hard things can really get" I didn't notice that until just now. My Bad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story sounds good so far, I love the idea of having more than one main character. This could really turn into something, so please work on it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hullo - The chapter, or rather introduction, was excellent. It brought real truth in the first few paragraphs and at the end. It sounds interesting. Can't wait to read the rest - which naturally means that I could love it if you continued with this story. With Admiration ~FwG |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue! |