Reviews for Cowering in a corner
Raven Gray chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
wow excellent poem great word choices deep full of emotion n very detailed terrific job n keep it up
ps plz check out the trilogy n let me know what u think
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
This was wonderful and you caught the mood and pain that comes with being abused by someone you love. I just wish my aunt was smart enough to stand her ground... But I guess she wasn't. Wonderful work.
AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 8/23/2004
this was a very strong piece. i really liked how it came across. great job!
Leo chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
This is good very deep so emotional Great job! Keep writing
Space-ghost-boy chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
Oh. very good! Vergood, yes! I like how the emotional pain is greater than the physical pain. That whole concept really echos.
If I am the Wife beater, please castrate me.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
Beautiful, you are truly talented with transfering emotion from the page to the reader. I can really relate to this, you brought back a lot of memories from my life, keep up the good work. I know you will.
Much love,
Narev chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
This was an intense poem, I really like the lines So I watch you raise you fist one more / And I do the same cause it just doesn't matter
It really paints this picture in my mind of these two people just... Wow... I really liked this poem!