Reviews for The Perfect One
Ajariel the Bloody chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
Maggot is, I find, a lovely way to describe someone. I find people generally dislike being referred to as "maggot".

Hope I don't bother you with all these reviews... you're just the only Satanist I've found here, so I think I'll stick to you for a while, in a saprophyte kind of manner. Sorry, i just really wanted to use the word "saprophyte", because I like it. So there, done, I used it.

Anywho, you don't even appear to have been posting much for the past, what, two years?

Anyhow, your stuff is good, you should continue.

Bloody yours,

-Ajariel the Bloody (Ah, the joys of the "commie t-shirt effect")HS!
conservative121 chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
i would swear you don't like me. every review i have in the essay section has been followed up by i review of yours attacking me in one form or another. If you don't like what i have to say now wait till you see what i've got coked up after the gay marriage essay.

oh and i don't reaay like this poem. nothing personal but i can't help not liking something. look in political poems for more of my reviews.
Twaberry chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
Very vague, but I like your use of insinuation instead of just saying everything plain out. Actually makes people think (which they don't seem to be doing much recently), though I have to say, you might want to clarify a tad. The sort of confusing, short piece thing is a really good idea, but it doesn't work if you don't get the point across. People don't analyze much, but there isn't much to analyze, you know? Still, really nice job, and I like the style. Very original -
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
Not sure I really understand this, because there was a lot more to Jesus than just being perfect. And even though he was perfect, show me where in the Bible it said he was popular?
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
_ I think I understand it...CBTD is rather tired...Must go to sleep...*falls a sleep* Z-;;
~ Noelle ~
RavenDove chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
Huh? I don't get it, and yet somehow I think I know who you're talking about.
It must be the sleep deperbation I'm going through.
greenbanana chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
Wow. Blunt. But good. I haven't ever seen any writing like this before. Very cool.
logical-unreason chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
How the hell can anyone be a satanist it's beyond me. Why worship something that rewards you with damnation.
Crazy.