Reviews for The Thirteenth
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Great
Cool chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Wow, I loved this! Very well written! :D
Tina3 chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
I think that this one shot is well written and very detailed with the actions the charaters take. I think you should just put more detail of what the people are wearing and their eye colour etc as its a bit vague however well written and make more one shots! I enjoyed it ;) hope this gives you the help you were looking for. If not I'm sorry ahahaha xD xxx
glowphone chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Barry Hall Kravatz like if you switch the b and the h it's Harry (Hairy) Ball Kravataz (Crevasse, a.k.a. a crack)! That must be intentional! Am I the only one who got that?

What an awesome story too! Love it!
An chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Haha aw so cute and perfect :) Loved it!
ffh chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
really cute story !
Rosedreamer101 chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
LOL - olalala ;)
DofD chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Amazing.
its-like-i-sed chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
.AWESOME! D xx
Call Me Irresponsible chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
This story was cute. Reading it was relaxing. So thank you.

I know that was probably a short review, but it was a short story, so...
Brolinshipper chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Amazing, i loved it:)
Warrior-Princess06 chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
'haha..nice..love it.! :))
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
This was really cute :)
DA-chen1 chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Yeah, very sexy and surprising.. that he cared so much!

Sweet in the end!

DA-chen
renegade01 chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
rest assured, you can definately write one-shots. ;)

loved daniel in this. she should have got some payback on barry. ah well.
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