Reviews for The Thirteenth
Green Eyed Angel chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
It turned out awesome. I loved it.
Elle Winters 9 chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
I don't know about this. I really liked reading this story, but when I got to the end it still seemed kind of unfinished for some reason, though I'm not too sure that the story really could continue much after where you have stopped it.

Anyway, don't get me wrong, I still like this story. Nice work, especially since it's only your second short story )
A.Annie.N chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
Nice! I really enjoyed it.

Annie
blurrylights chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
That was really good! It was excellently well written, and I LOVE Daniel. Can I kick Barry or something? And what's with that leggy brunette? She shows up in almost ALL of the stories I read...:) ha ha. Anyway, great job!
Revel in the Night chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
LMAO! I loved it! Very cute - one of the best short stories I have ever read! Thank you for writing!
EnchantedKorean chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
I really do hope that he's not just a rebound... :)
StoryPictures chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
So I'm 4 years late! I loved this. I'm sucha sap. Very good story. Excellent writing.
AfterPartyFiasco chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
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dOrKy-GuRl03 chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
aw glad that her day turns out great..i like it..that is very good one shot...looking forward your stories if you want more...bye..bye..
MK16 chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
NAW

so very adorable

good job, i thought it was a fab one shot

xD

maybe a suggestion for the title, could be 'bad luck" or 'my lucky charm'

haha they sound stupid :P

anways well done!
xLittleBlackConverse chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
aww! i LOVED this one-shot so much!

and god, i so wish Daniel was a real guy...yum :) lol
notreal17 chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
i thought that was soo good!
Sydney chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
it was great

real good
emerald chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
Nice, that was fun to read and Daniel is a cutie.
IOU chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
fantastic! loved it great one-shot!
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