Reviews for The Thirteenth |
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Green Eyed Angel chapter 1 . 11/9/2008 It turned out awesome. I loved it. |
Elle Winters 9 chapter 1 . 10/27/2008 I don't know about this. I really liked reading this story, but when I got to the end it still seemed kind of unfinished for some reason, though I'm not too sure that the story really could continue much after where you have stopped it. Anyway, don't get me wrong, I still like this story. Nice work, especially since it's only your second short story ) |
A.Annie.N chapter 1 . 10/4/2008 Nice! I really enjoyed it. Annie |
blurrylights chapter 1 . 9/16/2008 That was really good! It was excellently well written, and I LOVE Daniel. Can I kick Barry or something? And what's with that leggy brunette? She shows up in almost ALL of the stories I read...:) ha ha. Anyway, great job! |
Revel in the Night chapter 1 . 8/19/2008 LMAO! I loved it! Very cute - one of the best short stories I have ever read! Thank you for writing! |
EnchantedKorean chapter 1 . 6/19/2008 I really do hope that he's not just a rebound... :) |
StoryPictures chapter 1 . 4/3/2008 So I'm 4 years late! I loved this. I'm sucha sap. Very good story. Excellent writing. |
AfterPartyFiasco chapter 1 . 3/26/2008 I |
dOrKy-GuRl03 chapter 1 . 2/24/2008 aw glad that her day turns out great..i like it..that is very good one shot...looking forward your stories if you want more...bye..bye.. |
MK16 chapter 1 . 2/12/2008 NAW so very adorable good job, i thought it was a fab one shot xD maybe a suggestion for the title, could be 'bad luck" or 'my lucky charm' haha they sound stupid :P anways well done! |
xLittleBlackConverse chapter 1 . 2/5/2008 aww! i LOVED this one-shot so much! and god, i so wish Daniel was a real guy...yum :) lol |
notreal17 chapter 1 . 1/21/2008 i thought that was soo good! |
Sydney chapter 1 . 1/6/2008 it was great real good |
emerald chapter 1 . 12/14/2007 Nice, that was fun to read and Daniel is a cutie. |
IOU chapter 1 . 12/8/2007 fantastic! loved it great one-shot! |