Reviews for Child of Deceit
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
ooh, very nice.I like the lines "cold wind would aggravate the silence" and "these groundless self-made assumptions" which I relate too.

The "It pains me" starts to feel over done by the end though. I like how the last line is on its own.

I'm curious about the second stanza- how you used the verb "would"...