Reviews for Goodbye Tonight
K. Evenstar chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
Ah, beautiful. Like you said, I'm not sure about the last line, but on the whole, good stuff.
nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
You're right, the rhyming takes it down a few pegs, but it is still good. The ending wasn't so bad.. but maybe say something other than 'nice' but thats the rhyming again eh? Good work.
Stones decay, words last