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   ajashire1 chapter 23 . 5/6/2015 Wow this was a pretty good story. Though Christy did cry far to much for my liking and the communication skills between James and her sucked... Overall this story was wonderful. Thanks for the read! -Aja |
| smashthat chapter 23 . 7/13/2014 2 words...FREAKING AWESOME |
| Prodigee123 chapter 18 . 8/9/2013 sounds good |
| serahei chapter 3 . 2/17/2012 Lol. Christy is such a funny girl. |
| gothicangle1912 chapter 8 . 12/4/2009 win i think of james i imagen drew fuller, the first time i saw him my heart just melted corny i no but totaly true if you dnt no wo he isyou should look but mke shor you look from when he was on charmed it dosnt make a dif i just like his hair more. lol ?:/ :) |
| Erica71167 chapter 22 . 3/18/2009 Awesome story! I loved it! Very original. |
| Eccthlacine chapter 1 . 1/9/2009 I came to your story excited; a decent number of reviews always means something. But I didn't get past the first two paragraphs; I'm sure it's a good story, I was sad that I wouldn't be reading more when I got to the bottom, scanned a bit. To be honest the complete turn off is the constant use of the woman's name! In the first paragraph I was already done because it said "Christy" so many times! "she" is often preferrable or even "the woman", "the blonde" or whatever hair color it is; it'll give a little info on the character's appearance too! There are nearly as many indents as there should be; every time someone talks it should be a new paragraph. Just some friendly advice; sorry to be harsh. |
| noair chapter 2 . 11/9/2008 i have read your story couple of times now and i absolutely love it...i have no idea why i havent reviewed it before but i couldnt wait anymore so reviewed it! once again...i Freakin love your story! haha |
| cherrypiesizzle chapter 1 . 10/28/2008 LOL did you literally have to call him a bum? Seriously. You could have said 'homeless person' or described him a little more to allude to the fact that he's a 'bum'. What is he wearing? What colour is his hair? Not all bums are totally alike, you know. I mean, I laughed everytime I read 'bum' and I couldn't take the whole beating up thing seriously because I was too busy snickering at your description of him and how often 'bum' comes up. |
| Fayre Meira chapter 21 . 9/23/2008 i. heart. this. |
| BleedingTwilight chapter 22 . 8/9/2008 This was a wonderful story. The characters were definitely sympathetic, and their relationship was very sweet. I look forward to reading some of your other stories as well. |
| atreyu love chapter 23 . 4/1/2008 THAT WAS SUCH A CUTE ENDING :D i loved the it was a "love tap" part :D haha. |
| atreyu love chapter 18 . 4/1/2008 its good :D |
| atreyu love chapter 16 . 4/1/2008 YAY! theyre finally together! :) |
| atreyu love chapter 6 . 4/1/2008 i love it :D |